Revised translation on vaccines

Please revise your translation as follows:

1. Use your LexisNexis corpus to check collocations and terminology;

2. Organise the text into paragraphs - of more than one sentence - to prepare it for publication in a printed newspaper/magazine;

3. Using your corpus and resources in the section above, decide whether you have translated metadiscourse adequately and add/remove any items that need to.